As I commented in today's session, I very much liked the pace, the action, your use of dialogue, and the…
Hi Stephen - This was an incredible creative, lively romp of a story. The way you drew on familiar characters…
Your writing is so refreshingly straightforward and lively. I love all the dialogue, and in that way you do a…
This is an intriguing piece of writing. I am fascinated by how well you were able to be capture the…
This is a beautiful poem, Darlene, and I loved your reading of it. For me, it was all about the…
Great poem. It grabbed me right off the bat. I loved the ending - it really made the poem for…
Ev, This piece of writing (is it a first chapter in a novel?) is full of marvelous detail that makes…
Thanks for your comments, Robert. You are so right; this could be a master file from which I open up…
Millie, My email answer to you apparently wasn´t delivered. Again, thank you for your encouraging words, which have put wind…
Charlie, This is a great read. I found it fun and uplifting. So many of these do what first lines…