Lauri Williams
I thought the script was interesting in parts. I enjoyed watching the trailer because it seemed to move a lot…
On Juliet Williams’ Screeenplays
Halima marries the man she wants to and not who her parents pick for her. First rebellion and a host…
On Story Development
There are three of them and one of me. I have three children, 10. 8, and 5. Maddy and Teddy…
On Character Profiles
Halima's characterization Halima Bailey Evans is the amalgamation of two worlds: Jamaican American. Her parents, Henry, and Daphne, intentionally…
On Character Profiles
On Logline & Central Dramatic Question
Your logline and title sent me back to the Internet for pictures/research. On first reading of the logline, I immediately…
On Logline & Central Dramatic Question
Your logline is very simple and to the point. Your wording "wrestle with unexpected attraction" made me think--what we discussed…
On Logline & Central Dramatic Question
This logline is very well written and captivating. I imagined that I was reading a Netflix caption that made me…
On Logline & Central Dramatic Question
Three Possible loglines by Lauri Williams A suburban Jamaican wife/Mother finds herself wrongly convicted of masterminding a billion-dollar drug ring…
On Logline & Central Dramatic Question