Absolutely, you got it.
Well-written and well-paced. It does get deep into the acronym weeds, though. Will all the bureaucratic intricacies work for non-CDC…
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Good feedback, Millie. I appreciate your comments and am grateful for the markup you sent. You always have great attention…
Greatly enjoyed your obscure reference to the song Saguaro by the Austin Lounge Lizards. And the even more obscure reference…
Liking the reveal of a deeper reason for Maya/Enzo conflict in Chapt. 4. Nicely done.
Aha - so that's the source of the phrase "VFW meat raffles". Nicely done, sir!
Well-written and well-paced! Not sure about the salvation angle, however. Leroi seems to be sure that he is administering redemption,…
Thanks for the walk-around Stephen. Camp looks cozy, environs were definitely monochromatic this time of year. Best of luck as…
I thoroughly enjoyed my cruise on the good ship Rosy Scenario. And as for the second poem, well, "You can’t…